sweet damnation

          it’s hitting me

           the realisation of your mistreatment

           it’s killin me

           the bare truth of your abandoment

Once upon a time the evident of your love was so obvious

and the thick cloud of your guard was never dubious

Now all that’s left are anger and frustation

of all the steps you’ve taken that’s led us to this condemnation

           it’s hitting me

           the realisation of your mistreatment

           it’s killin me

           the bare truth of your abandoment

Can’t you see that we are not the same anymore?

Careless age of youth has passed, and we’ve walked through the door

of responsibility, the capability to ignore the insensitivity

and you can’t afford to waste a single drop of childish mentality

      So wake up, step up and stand up

prove yourself strong, regain the respect you’ve lost

For we know that within life’s toughest journey

that’s where rewarding experiences are at most

JK

3 Responses to “sweet damnation”

  1. Ivan Says:

    Dear Jane,

    The poem is beautiful. Let me add some for you.

    Do Not Ever Look Back.
    As what had happened will stay in the past.
    Open your heart and eyes for the new beginning.
    As you never know what is awaiting for you in the future.
    Old wound last for a long time, but new love will surpress the pain.

    Sounds a little crappy, don’t u think ? :P

  2. nonie Says:

    hahaha
    thx mate, but the poem isn’t about my own experience. I kinda put myself in someone’s shoes when i made it.
    hehehe ;p

    p.s. i don’t look back. never do

  3. Ivan Says:

    Oops … mAIuhIAUhIAUhiUAh … didn’t know that. :)
    Glad to hear that. I know u wouldn’t. :)

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